@Anorak You will be on the train but unaware of the train going over the edge.

@Atlin
I did respond to it, thank you very much.

Elbeck wrote:

Wesley grimaced as he barely managed to jerk the the sword back in time, having suddenly heard the boy speak up. Was oncoming death all it took to sway the lad's mind? Wesley couldn't help but be frustrated at the unnecessary complication this squabble spawned. He looked the lad over grimly, unwilling to hesitate twice. "Listen boy, I didn't come here to murder my peers, but pointing a gun without provocation is neither to be tolerated nor befitting of the crown you so adulate. I'll spare you on the sole condition that you hand the gun to me. No words, just give it to me grip first and you live". Wesley presented his hand, ready to enforce his ultimatum.

@Cpt.Nemo

Cpt.Nemo wrote:

Vincent brought out his hand and took his glove off and a bony hand appeared, He shook the opposing hand in agreement of the situation. Once the shaken hands took place, he noticed with his cunning eyes that the above light flicked. Vincent raised an eyebrow and pointed at the light, "Is the supposed to happen?" he asked with curiosity.

My post edited after some unruling comments

Vincent didn't approve of Amon's actions, "Are we going to save the Queen and Country or not, you pompous snob of a horse" he said fumingly, He then felt the carriage shake and the light flicker, he then looked out side of the window and saw the end of a track, "GUYS, ITS A TRAP" he yelled as he ran to the side down and saw the train behind them stopped.

Charlottes eyes widened shocked and she looked around "blimey! What's going on!?" She said.

(( No ya didn't kiddo. He gave you the choice of handing over your gun, or getting stabbed in the face. You can't just shake his hand and ignore the rapier pointed at you. whether or not Vincent is a fictional person, he's still a person. He would have to be a pretty dumb person to try shaking the hand of the man holding a sword in his face. ))

@Cpt.Nemo

Serenity widen her eyes in shocked. a trap? No way! she thought. "Just great, it looks someone knew about the invitation from the queen and wanted to keep us from going to our desination." She muttered

Stelios was about to answer back with an affirmation of some sort, but his thoughts were interrupted by that revelation. He couldn't believe it, but upon seeing the tracks, he coudn't help but mutter curses under his breath. "Guys, do any of you know our current location? Or how to get to the castle?" He couldn't help but raise his voice slightly at the end; the situation seemed to take a turn for the worse, and he was a bit of a pessimist. He breathed deeply, hoping that it'll help calm him down--soon.

(@Atlin Vincent doesn't know fear.)

(( Nemo, that's a shit answer, AND a cop out. You're character can be as brave as you want, but he knows fear. Fear is primal, every man knows it. aside from that, being fearless, and being a complete idiot are two completely seperate things. there is a man, with a sword in your face. You've never met him, and have no reason what so ever to assume he's lying when he says it's either your gun or your life. Fear, and common sense, are not the same thing. Your character, brave as he is, wants to live, I assume. To that end you need to convey some humanity, not just "I'm the main character, this stuff is happening". Give him a life, a role in the world you made, not just a name and a bloody gun in a briefcase. You've been glossing over everything like you're invincible, shaking your would be killers hand. If he hadn't said it already, I'd knock him on his ass, take my sword back, and kill you myself for being so stupid about everything. Think, before you post. Give yourself a chance to make sure everything lines up, that no one is unaccounted for. You can't lead a role play and god mode past every threat, that's not how it works. The best main characters in the history of writing have lost, a lot, some even died to achieve their goals. But not one of them ever ignored a direct threat and shook their attackers hand without a damn good plan.))

@Cpt.Nemo

(( @Atlin, Fine Knock me to the ground if you so desire, Just move on, It was a mistake, Can't you just accept that I make mistakes, Just please, Move on from the argument.))

(( See, this is what I mean. I didn't even say I would knock YOU on the ground. What I said was

" If he hadn't said it already, I'd knock him on his ass, take my sword back, and kill you myself for being so stupid about everything."

I understand that people make mistakes, so do I, all the friggin time. But when you're typing things out, you have the luxury of re-reading your posts before they go up. Analyze your decisions, decide if you really want to take that course of action. Vincent is not invincible, if he continues to shrug off every threat made to him, I will go out of my way to kill him.

This isn't me being mad at you, or trying to prove something. I'm trying to help you RP. You're missing a lot of the basic ideas. ))

@Cpt.Nemo

(( Ok, I didn't read it propably in the way I was supposed to read it, Can we please continue on with the roleplay???????????????????)) @Atlin

(Um is it to late to join? I know it's late but I think I'll give this a try)

( you can be with Anorak?? @JustTopaz )

(I'm moving on, if you two wish to keep bickering [advising in Atlin's opinion.] then do it in PMs so it doesn't clutter the RP. Thanks!! )

Flora was about to speak up, knowing she was going to say something about how few people looked at women as equals and that his thoughts were ahead of his time and that he needed to keep his mouth shut before she made him shut it. He had no right to tell anyone else's secretes.
But Flora's attention was caught by the fact that the train was about to run off the tracks. She looked around the cabin full of people, realizing what was going to have to happen. "Those tracks aren't going to fix themselves. We'll have to jump." Flora wasn't going to wait for the others, she went to the back of the train car and opened the door and jumped to the other car. She needed to find one that opened in the side so they could jump. Luckily the next car did open and she looked out at the ground rushing by. It was mildly flat terrain with a few trees. The jump was going to have to be well timed if Flora didn't want to face plant into the tree.
Flora looked around and decided that she will have to jump on three. She closed her eyes, afraid to watch. "One...two..." And the three was lost on the wind as she jumped from the train. She didn't scream but she lost her breath as she landed on the ground. Flora rolled a few meters before coming to a stop. She sat up, knowing her had cut and bruises everywhere, but she was alive and off the train that was about to crash.

(if he doesn't mind I'm happy)

(Nah, I don't mind whatsoever - the more the merrier. )

(do I need an OC or can I just her up as I go?)

(We're all just making up our characters as we go, I guess. It's up to you. Oh, by the way, no one created a character sheet for this role play. Just saying.)

@JustTopaz

(( @Anorak
I need to post please, to make my post.))

(OK so @Anorak where are we?)

(I am currently at the rail way, waiting for a train to come so I can hi-jack it. I want to hi-jack it so I can get out of England since I am a wanted man.)

(( Nu nu nu, anorak lol, You got it all wrong, Victorian Era is a time period not the state Victoria is aus, lol, That's what The Victorian Roleplay is about, The Victorian Era, k?
BTW, We are in England. ))

@Anorak

Cpt.Nemo wrote:

(( Nu nu nu, anorak lol, You got it all wrong, Victorian Era is a time period not the state Victoria is aus, lol, That's what The Victorian Roleplay is about, The Victorian Era, k?
BTW, We are in England. ))

@Anorak

(Edited, dearest sir.)

(We are in the part that train is gonna crash or something)

(( You're free to your opinion, but don't patronize me for trying to help him improve his RPing. I might've made a bigger scene than needed, and I apologize for that, but it was getting on my nerves somethin' fierce.))

@FallChild

(OK then Ano)
A girl walked on the platform where (whatever Ano's character's name is) and leaned against the iron guard-post. She wore a styled hooded cape with a deep hod, hiding her face from any who might pass by.