*in the caves*
"OK so we've found a place to stay. now we have 3 choices:we could steal what we need, buy what we need: if you you guys have any money, or we could just go without." Just said in an authoritative way

John didn't like Just's authority but was too tired to argue. 'We can't steal.' He sobbed, 'things will just get worse.'

"it's up to you guys."

"Let's just sleep for tonight." John said, finding a place on the floor, "Night..." His voice ricotched of the cave walls until they were no more and we was asleep.

"Night"

The morning came quickly for hunter, john and just. The sun stretching its rays into the cave.

Just woke

John's eyes flashed open to see just and hunter.
'Morning!'

"morning."just said sleepily

John recalled the previous events before standing up and stretching. 'What to do today?'

"food? water? bedding?" Just surgested.

"There is the old skip we can go to?" John said, walking to the entrance of the cave, letting the light spill on his face, warming his soul.

A girl shivered in the trees below. She was no older than sixteen and was as skinny as a twig. She had not eaten anything for the past four days and was very thirsty. She looked up for what she thought might be the last time and saw someone at the enterance of what looked to be a cave. She tried to yell out to them but all that came out was a small croak.

Do you see that person over there? She looks very young.


Should we go introduce ourselves and get a new friend?

John looked out of the cave exit, to see a girl. "We could user her help..."

She tried to call out again. But her attempt was met with another croak. She watched as the world began to blur. She tried to stand but fell over from lack of strength. She lay on her back and looked up at the sky. Everything was going black at the corners of her vision. She shut her eyes and allowed the darkness to engulf her.

Just saw the girl fall.  She ran over to her and knelt beside her. She looked uncontentious.
"One of you help me bring her inside." Just said

I am hidding behind a rubbish bin. I watched the group of people in the cave and started approaching them.

John saw the man, 'come help!' (To jack) john ram over to the woman that feinted, feeling her pulse. Her heart was beating.

What are you doing in my cave. Wait, you are those kids hiding from the police. I should tell on yous. But I won't. Because I want to join you in this adventure. I am Aragon. Ravenshield. I will join and help you as much as I can. We should go now. The police come round here bout now every night. Let's go I now a great place to stay. (takes them to place) well he we are. Make your self comfortable and get some rest. I will prepare some food.

"who are you?." Just asked

John followed Aragon, bringing the woman that feinted and the man that had approached them. 'What is this place?'

''That a long story..Me and others fellow soldiers plan to rebel the government. However the police know about it and.. Lucky that I mange to escape from them and that why I am hiding in that cave.'' said jacktheking.

Who the hell are you and what are you doing in my house. I brought these kids here so they could be safe. If you don't leaver now I'll beat your head in mate. Leave now. *turning to kids* I am Aragon. A former police officer, the best out of them all. But that was until it started. The revolution. The deputies of cops, on orders by the government, started killing assassinating and murdering cops. They wiped them all out. Except for me. I was alone one night at the station. About 5 deputies came in and said nuthin. I knew what they were up to but thy didn't know I knew. They all pulled out their guns. They all counted to 3 and fired at the same time. Of course, being as cocky as they were they only all had one bullet in their gun. That was their mistake. When they fired I ducked to the floor. As they were reloading ipulled out my old dad's gun a 44. magnum. I had 6 shots and only used 5. One for each of therm. Once I had done with them I knew I had to hightail it out of there. So I took refuge in the cave. Now the deputies are in control, arresting and killing people on ridiculous charges. So that's how I ended up here.

John shouted, 'leave jack alone, he helped us!'