my poem thingy

Subject: my poem thingy Sun Sep 22, 2013 9:28 am

The Peacock

by Admin

This is my 'attempt' at poetry... Here we go...

With each step, I grow vain,
My rainbow unfolds in elegance.
I'm the symbol of pride and vanity!
Fanning my treasure in magnificence,
I am beauty in my surrounds,
My forest of brilliance and silkiness.
My call of distinction and pitch!
I am the touch of wonder,
Parading, as I show of my extended circular form.

Well, there's my poem...
Please comment,

Member Posts : 32 RPG Tokens : 4251 Join date : 2013-08-22

Cool poem ˚_˚‖

Subject: Re: my poem thingy Mon Sep 23, 2013 1:06 am

Thank you XLR8

Guest

That wws amazing. Awesome work man

Subject: Re: my poem thingy Tue Sep 24, 2013 11:12 pm

I hear sarcasm....

Guest

No sarcasm man. I am serious

Guest

Like I said your works shows you should be in 8A, and this poem is yet another example of your work

Subject: Re: my poem thingy Wed Sep 25, 2013 12:22 am

Awww... Thanks

Guest

Subject: Re: my poem thingy Wed Sep 25, 2013 6:55 am

I don't like 8A though... I prefer 8B

Guest

Hmm weird whatever then your choicr

Subject: Re: my poem thingy Wed Sep 25, 2013 10:27 pm

Yeah, thanks though.

Guest

It's all right

Subject: Re: my poem thingy Wed Sep 25, 2013 11:13 pm

I sent this poem off to a competition a little while ago... Mmm...

Guest

Hope you win

Subject: Re: my poem thingy Wed Sep 25, 2013 11:23 pm

Er.. I already have won... Lol

Guest

Oh ok cool. Congrats then I guess lol

Subject: Re: my poem thingy Sat Sep 28, 2013 3:17 am

Yeah, this poem is getting published in a book

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