humanity has finally created effective space travel and is in search for new planet's because earth has been over populated and polluted beyond help so humanity has set it's sight's on other planet's first sending crim's with armed guard.however zion was not a normal planet instead it held a valuable resource element 116 a extremely combustible and light element that can be used as a fuel for space travel the only one problem alien beast and dragon's the most dangerous one a dragon like creature called the deaths claw.bomb's laser even gun's won't work on it the only thing that kill's this creature is hand to hand combat and blade's. the elite troop's can strike each weak point easily but normal troop's use heavily armored titan mecha's to take down the monster's of zion. the only safe hold is fort Lincoln named after the discover of planet zion captain Lincoln. nightly this stronghold is attack by alien creature's and is a constant struggle to survive.
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(will add enemies and vehicle's when i get on next)
THE Death's Claw:a huge dragon like alien creature(will put picture later) weak point middle of it's back through the spine and into it's heart.
the black arachnid's : http://www.toy-tma.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/08/Metroid-Prime-Final-Boss.jpg (also known as the black widow for there habit of eating there mating partner's)weak spot:under neath there pincer's a sword to the brain should do the job or a demolition charge placed on it's underbelly.
the boil walker's: undead creature's of various shape's and size's that if killed or injured will explode(if in a frenzy it will eat anything so if being chased lead to enemies)weak spot:anywhere but for a clean kill the head take's 10 second's to explode so run.
the black wolves : http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/104/5/f/alien_mutant_wolf_by_aliendragonlover-d3dz12e.jpg be careful around these creature's most attack's will kill them but they travel in pack's so avoid if possible.
charger bull : a 4 meter tall a two headed bull with three row's of teeth a muscular tail with spike's on the end thick hide which prevent's laser's from being effective gun's or sword's are recommended when fighting this creature.
spiker scorpion: 6 foot tall blue scorpion 10 feet long but unlike normal scorpion's on earth these one's are covered in spike's best form of attack is to get it to swallow a bomb or a rail gun down the middle of it's body.
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the Mecha's: http://media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/f9/ef/b7/f9efb76d9e916d337ed4c64af30da95d.jpg heavily armored war machine effective against most alien's and heavily guarded by standard troop's
the hell crusher tank: http://media.desura.com/images/groups/1/3/2074/mammoth_tank_i_by_chaoshour-d39k9us.jpg normally in squad's of four with various back up.
standard troop's : http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/128/4/a/russian_soldiers__futuristic_concept_by_badillafloyd-d64kgdf.jpg
The elite soldier's : come in many type's of clothe's are known for thier supreme skill and being able to survive on there own for month's at a time. according to statistic's elite soldier's are equal to 100 standard soldier's
elite troop's when recruited into there rank's http://www.zbrushcentral.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=74083.
troop mover/support unit: http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/109/1/0/troop_support_unit___concept_art_alex_drummond_by_alexdrummo-d627yb6.jpg think steel Armour hold's large amount's of ammo for troop's great vehicle for there maneuverability.

Name: FBC
Age: Unknown
Characteristics: Ruthless, fearless
Gender: Male
Weapon's: Carbon rifle, a weapon designed specifically for the FBC; Forward Battle Commanders and for the integrated combat suit he is suited up with. These commanders are also equipped with a laser blast which can be swiftly emitted from the robot's palm, melting through nearly anything.
History: This FBC was created specifically for the Planet Zion mission, but was not specifically designed for these hardcore monsters and aliens which scourge these wastelands. All he remembers is being dropped off to Port Lincoln, his past life as a human was drowned away once he was placed into this cyborg form.
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Skills: Extremely swift speed, illuminant lights built into head, super strength and fair accuracy.
Fears: FBC has no known fears.
Other: N/A

Name: David blackwater
Age:22
Characteristics: fearless reckless cocky brave crazy and relaxed in any situation giving his men hope no matter what.when in command however he take's thing's extremely serious and put's casualties to a minimum
gender:male
Weapon's: a holo rifle http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110728161209/fallout/images/5/58/Holorifle.jpg .2 Luger's and a standard leader's laser pistol http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5105/5636165701_5f109dff1d_m.jpg . on top of this he has two electrified sword's
History:born on planet earth he looked for anyway to escape earth and go to a new planet. starting of as a military grunt he fought in riot's in his home town this lead to him being transferred to a space vessel which landed on a foriegh planet and immediately was under attack for his brave fighting he was recruited into the elite's 2 year's later he saved his commander's life making he his own boss.after that he was transferred to zion where the best of the best went.
Appearance:sandy trench coat (can turn invisible for short amount's of time)white dress shirt black pinstriped vest (made out of a particularly strong material)black dress pant's and shoe's a grappling hook is attached to his belt using titanium fiber wire instead of plasma rope.
Skill's:stealthy expert marksman with his chosen weapon's trained in fighting acrobatic's and sword play making him a force to be reckoned with.
Fear's:he is mostly fearless but fear's being left for dead on planet earth.
Other:only just passed the mental exam

"sir should i take it down"the solider was apart of a science research group sent out to study the wild life this one was a heavy weapon's "nah i will take it."david licks the corners of his lips "should be fun"the charger bull just stood there preparing to charge. THUD the bulls now sped up with each step. david ran at it 1 ft away david puts his foot at the meeting point of the heads and backs flips unsheathing his swords lands on the bulls heads slamming them into the ground and thrust the blades into both sides of the mid spinal area going into both hearts. the pulls stopped moving DEAD david steps off cleans the blades and re sheaths them.wind started blowing a helicopter had landed by and a man in a military coat ( http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20111030164141/fallout/images/7/7a/US_Army_General_outfit.png )walked over to david and holds out his hand "Cornell smith we need you for a special operation mr blackwater" david handshakes the man "aren't i here as a punishment for stopping people dieing" a grin come the cornell's face "ahh yes i don't believe i made that choice.are you going to help us or not" john started to walk to the helicopter "of course i am" david replies with a cheeky grin and steps on the helicopter with the Cornell the helicopter takes of.
3 hours pass: david was sitting in the middle of a debriefing room the commander dribiling about safety precautions.

The robot moved forward nonchalantly, his robot eyes scouting throughout the outline of the base. He looked back at the metal door of the briefing room, the glass smudged over by specks of dirt and grime which had quickly formulated over the material.

the briefing finished david got up walked out the door while the other member's of the expedition were asking question's the door opened automatically to reveal a cyborg "ello I think you're a bit late mate the name's david. your's "davids says with a cheeky smile.

The robot stared back at the man with curiosity, his head cocking to the side with a mechanical whir. "I have no name." He said slowly, in his dull monotone voice, "But you may call me FBC or whatever you wish." He said, taking a step back to allow other soldier to move past from the metal platform.

"Jesus Christ who stuck a broom up your butt.well see you later"john then walks of with a swagger in his step opens the steel door into the rest of the camp where there was a mixture of metal buildings and large canvas tents.

The robotic humanoid followed, his body swiftly turning around and the pistons in his legs hissing in protest, he would need to recharge soon. "Do you have a problem with me?" He asked, the monotone staying in his voice, yet, this time tinged with aggresiveness.

"nah you just seem a bit up tight it's a old expression"david then offer's his hand as gesture for a hand shake "you will get use to me eventually"

"I see." He said, the menace in his voice instantly dropping, recognizing it as something the humans would call 'jokes.' The robot accepted the handshake firmly, giving one shake before taking a stand back. "Nice to meet you, David."

"well i am off to the rookie tent for there introduction there should be a charging station for ya if you're coming"david turns to the right and walks all the way down to the giant steel wall where a large canvas tent stood. david steps in to see ten hammocks across the back wall a very large table with around 15 seats sat around it a kitchen at the left wall and another flap that went into another section of the tent.

The cyborg gave a nod, and moved over to them, looking up at the small structure, slipping into the tent swiftly. "This charging station. Where would it be." He said, his blue eyes scouring around the room.

"should be through the flab"david walks to the end of the table takes a seat places his feet on the table and begin's to lean "the big silver thing i believe"

The robot muttered a thanks before moving over to the large charger, attatched to the metallic wall, plugging himself into the elongated cords. He looked aroundd at the camp, letting his shoulders slump and his body move into it's hibernation mode.

a tall man i military uniform walk's into the room "a mister steelwater" david put's up his hand "aye that's me"the man walk's over and give's david a letter "i'll be off"the man run's out of the room as david read's the letter *you david steelwater have been chosen for the opening speech of the recruit introduction and will be given a medal of valor for your service's to the human race.further more you have been promoted to elite commander...* "great just F!@#ing great they making me out to be some superior stuck prick what a bloody way to spring it on me"

The robot looked toward his accomplice, his cybernetic rimmed eyes looking into his. "I see. Isn't being promoted a good thing, however?" He asked, shuffling into a more comfortable position on the charging dock before looking out the bullet proof glass beside him, and out to the desolate, red lands.

"it can be but it can also cause disruption with the troops because some people get to this rank by black mail bribery and become a bunch of pencil pushing stuck up snobs who demand respect sadly. the thing that's bugging me most is now have to get all dressed up for this god forsaken speech and medal that's the problem i'm a solider not a some traditional snob"

Name: Aaron Kattenberg code name striker
Age: 20
Characteristics: Trusting and trust worthy does what he's told when he's told
gender: Male
Weapon's: 50 cal bolt action, Katana, two p99s and a p90
History: ex-sas agent got a letter for this mission
Appearance: http://www.google.com.au/imgres?imgurl=http%3A%2F%2F37.media.tumblr.com%2Ftumblr_mc9h4za86j1rioi8oo1_1280.jpg&imgrefurl=http%3A%2F%2Fda-unseen.tumblr.com%2Fpost%2F34053630183&h=600&w=800&tbnid=mnUFl97lR6gHrM%3A&zoom=1&docid=R4PqUay50BHQeM&ei=fxPeU6yXCozp8AWpgoHgCg&tbm=isch&ved=0CB0QMygVMBU4ZA&iact=rc&uact=3&dur=3781&page=5&start=100&ndsp=26
Skill's: Master of stealth, climbing and excellent marksman
Fear's: None
Other: Prefers solo missions

Striker walks into the tent "Sir your speech starts in one hour" Striker walks out, couple of minuets later he runs back to the tent "Commander we are under attack, only looks like a small petrol though shall I take care of it sir, FBC can help as well"

"thanks well i better get ready then after i check this out"david stands up pull's out his sword and walks out the tent and use's his grappling gear to climb the wall quickly what lay at the bottom was 2 black widow's and a few packs of black wolves david rappels down until he is a few feet above a black widow then drops landing on the top quickly jumping off behind it pulling out his luger he shoot's four wolves they fall to the ground dean two more start running at him david continues to walk back wards giving him space between him and the black widow one of the wolves jumps at david he quckly brings up the blade chopping off it's head.

Striker sees a black wolf approaching david for the back and pulls out his 50 cal and shoots it strait through the eye it falls to the ground just behind david, david looks a striker, striker nods and puts his gun away

The FBC strolled forward, his body half charged; for now. Without any hesitation and thought, he moved forward, bringing out a gun which was equipped with a silencer and a fresh clip of ammo. Two of the hybrid wolves stared at him from a few yards away before sprinting ahead, teeth jarring from their bloody mouths.

Shotting both the abominations in the head, he looked over to the reinforcements which were barreling toward the gates, fixing up the broken parts the beasts were ramming from.

the black widow started to move all 8 of it's legs slowly picking up speed david runs at it then slides bringing up the blade through the pinsors cutting it belly wide coming out the back unscathed and untouched the blue blood pouring in all direction's from the widow.sheathing the sword and pulling out both of his lugers and shooting 6 times killing a entire pack of black wolves and the rest retreating while the last widow remained

The robot swivelled his head to the side, watching the soldiers run toward the gates, surrounded with their heavily armored vehicles and abominations. "Defend the gates!" He called as he replaced his pistol for a metallic machine gun. Before he could get in a shot at the creatures which barelled through the damaged barriers, one of the vehicles slammed through the gate, followed by dozens of soldiers.